IELTS writing test 1 : Describing a line graph
Here is an example "How to Describing a Line graph" The line graph illustrates the number of visiting students to tourist destinations in Europe which are London, Paris and Rome in the period of 2011 to 2014. The rates of visiting to London showed an increased significantly trend over the year starting from 15.000 to almost 20.000 while the rates of visiting to Rome and Paris experienced fluctuate year by year. In the year of 2011 the number of visiting students to Rome was the highest amongst other destinations at 18000 and that was happened to in the year of 2013 with the same number. But then it come down dramatically to 12000 in 2012. And in 2014 the number of visiting student in Rome decreased again at 16000 after increased in 2013 and that was the bottom out number of visiting students in the end of the period. In early 2011 the number of visiting students to London and Paris were 10000 and 15000 successively Pari’s rate increased sharply from 2011 to...
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