Sia Kate Isobelle Furler
Paragraph 1 : What this person is doing today
Topic sentence: Sia Fuler is well-known as a talented singer in
the world.
Facts or examples: Alot of people likes her songs. Wherever she
goes, she will have fans. She is a singer with a beautiful voice and unique
style
Paragraph 2 : The road to
success
Topic sentence: Actually,the process to success is long and
tortuous.As for her,it's right,too.
Facts or examples: She started her career from the presenter of the radio
Paragraph 3: Two
characteristics that led tod success
Topic sentence : Sia Fuler has many characteristics that made
her become a successful singer. Sincerity, patience, love and intellegence.
Facts or examples : She made her lyrics become so meaningful
and contains a deep meaning.
Sia Fuler is
well-known as a talented singer from Australia. She is a girl who has a talent
in singing and writing songs. She created many songs sung by famous singers
such as Beyonce, christina aguilere, kelly clarkson and rihanna. Sia
Fuler is a singer with a beautiful voice and unique style. she always wore a wig while
singing. She wanted to teach that a singer has to be seen in
her voice. Appearance is only the second value of a singer. Good
singer is one who can make people love in her voice. Instead of a physical or
appearance.
Sia Fuler started her career from the presenter of the
radio.She was also a singer in a famous band in australia. But unfortunately
her band had to break up because as one of her band members suspect in the drug
problem. Since then Sia Furler start her solo career. She started a solo career in singing the world since
1996. She became a cafe singer in her hometown in Adelaide. Sia fuler becoming
known internationally since she was with
Christina Aguilera make a sixth album for Christina Aguilera. Since then, Sia
fuler became known among artists and many artists are asked to make a song. one
of which is Beyonce. Beyonce sing a song written by Sia, Pretty Hurts. The song
was originally created for Katy Perry. But Katy Perry didn’t reply to emails
from Sia. Sia fuller has experience with tragic love story. She abandoned by her lover who died in an accident.
Shewas depressed at the time. She had tried to
use drugs and suicidal. However, she prefers to be steadfast and Sia creating
songs chandeliers. And that song won Grammy Award in 2015.
Sia Furler always
create songs with deep meaning. As the song is titled Big Girls Cry, meaningful
as a big and great woman everybody can cry. Because they’re as a human to. Most
of Siang’song is a song created by Sia. That mean she is not only as a good singer but as a good
writer to. All the songs created by Sia made top the tracks around the world.
According to survey of BBC, Sia is a seventh possition as a richest man in
Australia. I think Sia can be the firts richest man in Australia tomorrow with
her talent.
you are a good writer, but before you start to post your story or all about text check back whatever you wrote even if the smallest things. for example, writing a word. Because i've found words missing or incorrect on your post for example you should write "a lot of" but you write "alot of" and other sentences. I think your posts is good enough but try to use a simple sentences for not to appear too rigid. happy to read your next posts!! Xoxo
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BalasHapusHi ryadi.
BalasHapusYoure a good writer. But you can give more examples of your topic
Hi there,
BalasHapuswhat an interesting article. I enjoy my time spent on this. I've ever heard about her before and I've known much more by now. Don't forget to capitalize the names like 'christina aguilere, kelly clarkson and rihanna.' Thanks!
Hi Riyadi, you should pay attention for using capitals alphabet for name
BalasHapusGood paragraph di, nice describing
BalasHapusHi le, nice idea you've got there that you actually got inspired by Sia.
BalasHapusHi Ryadi, you spelt *intelligence wrong. But overall your writing is very interesting, I enjoyed reading it.
BalasHapusHaii riady, i want to be sia kate. Because she has a good voice.
BalasHapusMaybe you must to improve your grammer. But your paragraph composition already oke.
Hai riady, i want to be sia kate. I think you have to improve your grammer but your composition paragraph already oke.
BalasHapusgood job riady
Hi Riyadi
BalasHapusit's a nice paragraph.
i like her also, she has a nice voice and her songs are so nice.
OMG Siaaaa I'm so into her than any other characteristic singers. She is so professional doing her character in entertainment world!
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BalasHapusSia Kate Isobelle Furler
Paragraph 1 : What this person is doing today
Topic sentence: Sia Fuler is well-known as a talented singer in the world.
Facts or examples: A lot of people likes her songs. Wherever she goes, she will have fans. She is a singer with a beautiful voice and unique style
Paragraph 2 : The road to success
Topic sentence: Actually,the process to success is long and tortuous.As for her,it's right,too.
Facts or examples: She started her career from the presenter of the radio
Paragraph 3: Two characteristics that led tod success
Topic sentence : Sia Fuler has many characteristics that made her become a successful singer. Sincerity, patience, love and intellegence.
Facts or examples : She made her lyrics become so meaningful and contains a deep meaning.
Sia Fuler is well-known as a talented singer from Australia. She is a girl who has a talent in singing and writing songs. She created many songs sung by famous singers such as Beyonce, christina Aguilere, Kelly Clarkson and Rihanna. Sia Fuler is a singer with a beautiful voice and unique style. she always wore a wig while singing. She wanted to teach that a singer has to be seen in her voice. Appearance is only the second value of a singer. Good singer is one who can make people love in her voice. Instead of a physical or appearance.
Sia Fuler started her career from the presenter of the radio.She was also a singer in a famous band in australia. But unfortunately her band had to break up because as one of her band members suspect in the drug problem. Since then Sia Furler start her solo career. She started a solo career in singing the world since 1996. She became a cafe singer in her hometown in Adelaide. Sia fuler becoming known internationally since she was with Christina Aguilera make a sixth album for Christina Aguilera. Since then, Sia fuler became known among artists and many artists are asked to make a song. one of which is Beyonce. Beyonce sing a song written by Sia, Pretty Hurts. The song was originally created for Katy Perry. But Katy Perry didn’t reply to emails from Sia. Sia fuller has experience with tragic love story. She abandoned by her lover who died in an accident. Shewas depressed at the time. She had tried to use drugs and suicidal. However, she prefers to be steadfast and Sia creating songs chandeliers. And that song won Grammy Award in 2015.
Sia Furler always create songs with deep meaning. As the song is titled Big Girls Cry, meaningful as a big and great woman everybody can cry. Because they’re as a human to. Most of Siang’song is a song created by Sia. That mean she is not only as a good singer but as a good writer to. All the songs created by Sia made top the tracks around the world. According to survey of BBC, Sia is a seventh possition as a richest man in Australia. I think Sia can be the firts richest man in Australia tomorrow with her talent.